tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11761373.post6981338335248740687..comments2023-05-19T10:45:51.868-05:00Comments on Fine Whine: EphemeraVirginia Llorcahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08354795459855491623noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11761373.post-38783614891232517082012-07-17T09:16:08.017-05:002012-07-17T09:16:08.017-05:00Very good! I love how you jump into the story wit...Very good! I love how you jump into the story without wasting time info-dumping or explaining too much. You let the reader pick up on the details as the story progresses, which is a much more efficient (and artful) approach. Bravo!<br /><br /> Jonathan<br /><a href="http://www.ireadabookonce.com" rel="nofollow"> www.ireadabookonce.com</a>Jonathan Wilhoithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17330197977238770900noreply@blogger.com