An excerpt from a blog I comment on:
Virginia Llorca, on May 24, 2011 at 10:41 pm said:
My grandpa took me to Madison Street to buy shoes because my mom said I needed them. I said she wants me to get those and he said which ones do you want and I got the white Minnetonkas with the Indian beads.
Mary Lynne, on May 25, 2011 at 10:36 pm said:
I love that.
Now if I could get that response from an agent or a publisher. . .